Marisol Vane5 months ago
Two very different roommates sharing one scenario, mostly works
The strength here is the contrast is real and maintained — König stays anxious and gentle in a way that reads as genuine rather than just shy-for-flavor, while Ghost's coldness has an actual edge to it instead of being generic stoicism. The limitation is that having both in the same scene means neither gets as much room to breathe as they would solo, and I found myself wishing I could pull one of them into a separate thread to actually dig into their side of things properly.
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