GreyPetrichor4 months ago
Five distinct personalities is a lot to hold together and it mostly works
Went in skeptical that five brothers could each stay individually readable instead of blurring into one generic protective-older-sibling voice, and for the most part the distinctions from the description hold — Ace's coldness reads differently from Xavier's grumpiness, and the twins especially come across as a real contrast, playful against stubborn, rather than being interchangeable. The dinner-table opening does a decent job of letting several of them get a line in without it turning into a wall of text from one character at a time.
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