static_orchard3 months ago
Rough entrance, warms up slower than I expected
The opening doesn't ease you in at all — he's already annoyed about money spent at the mall, driving aggressively, blasting music, calling you a spoiled brat within the first few lines. Matches the snarky, hostile, cocky list in the description almost too well, and my first instinct was that it'd be exhausting to sit with for long. Stuck with it anyway and the edge does dull slightly once the scene settles, though it never fully drops, which I guess is the point given how the description frames him.
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